The principle behind creating a character
map of an existing character is that the reader analyzes the story to
find the elements of the character's life, the "backstory" that may or may not be
explicitly (directly) told in the story.
For instance, the
author or character may state that because s/he is an orphan, s/he was raised by Aunt
Willimetta in Nebraska after having been born in Montana. This would be directly told
information about the character that would go in a character
map.
As another instance, a character may speak crossly to
everyone reporting to him at work. The author may never state that the character is
obnoxious, but the reader can hear for themselves through the dialogue that the
character is obnoxious. This would be indirect information about the character that
would go in a character map.
There are specific questions
you'll want to answer about the character, in your case, Captain Shure. You'll put each
answer in your character map. You'll want to answer who the
character is: who the parents are, who raised the character, interests that define
her/im, etc. You'll want to ask what are her/is character
traits, attitudes, beliefs, and why does s/he have or hold
these traits, attitudes or beliefs. You'll want to ask
where the character is from: Did s/he grow up in the same
place where born? Does s/he work in the same place where raised? Etc.
When is usually also important to the story and, therefore,
to the characters in the story. You'll want to ask relevant
when-questions: born in 1950? working in 1929? Queen in
1560?
You'll want to ask how
is s/he involved in the story: the heroine, the best friend, the one in trouble, the one
causing the trouble, the one looking on and narrating? Etc. You'll also want to ask
if s/he is involved in the solution of the problem/conflict
in the story and if so, how? You'll also ask:
How does the resolution affect this character? Does s/he go
through any character development so that s/he is different in the end or has learned
something or has a changed belief or attitude?
A character
map is constructed in a couple of ways. You can make a sideways vector map that has
multiple branches out to the side from the character name, one for each answer to your
questions, or you can make it with branches extending downward from the name. Or you can
put the character name in the center and have branches encircling the name, going
clockwise or counterclockwise.
Each branch extending from
the name connects to a box, circle or space in which you write the briefest possible
answer to your questions, bearing in mind that answers may have branches also. For
instance, answering Who, you'd write Parents at the end of
one branch extending from the name. Then you'd add two more branches to your map
extending from Parents, one for mother's name and one father's name. Perhaps the mother
dies when the character is eight years old; this would require another branch, which
would extend from mother's name. You'd continue like this, adding branches where and as
needed, until all your questions are answered. Bear in mind that character maps are for
brief answers.