I really need help with writing a poem!?My poem have to include a simile and personification. Here is my poem: (please fix my mistake and add some...

I wake up in the calming
silence,

Feeling warmth upon my
skin,

Hummingbirds flutter with all their
might,

Through the lattice spread of
leaves,

Like blossoms popping in and
out,

A colorful illusion in the
moment,

I peer into the deep blue of the
sky,

Letting the world go
by,

I say enough of the hustle and
bustle,

The morning has just
begun,

She calls to all to wake and
rise,

Making me  delete every
care,

Summer
mornings,

My favorite,

Feeding
my understandings,

Searing deep within my
soul.

I really liked your poem.  I did a little
rearranging of the words and some editing, but not much.  The feelings are there and you
were able to help me to visualize the summer morning.  I like the way that you painted a
picture.