How do I make this a stronger thesis statement? It's in regards to the movie "SUPER SIZE ME", the image of child like clowns. In this...

This documentary was made for the purpose of illustrating
how the fast food industry has no regard for nutrition and illustrates how it encourages
poor nutrition for profit only.

So, some possible
suggestions that are stronger:

1. The fast food
   industry encourages poor nutrition by serving calorie-laden
   food.


2. Fast food franchises' products are non-nutritious
   and addictive.


3. People can become obese by eating too much
   fast food.

As you know, Mr. Spurlock actually
DID become obese and his cholesterol shot up sky high after eating at a certain fast
food chain. And, he only super-sized his meal when it was offered to him by an employee.
It took him over a year to lose the weight he gained and get back to
normal.

I think you need to revise you thesis because if
you are writing about this documentary, the fast food industry was NOT presented as
"something nice". Good luck!