My letter to lil wayne The game wasn’t yours. You were destined to win it and with a passion for music you did. Now that you’re in jail...

I see you went a totally different route with your letter. I love it! It is very metaphoric, and at times even poetic.

You will have to excuse my ignorance for lil wayne though. I don't know alot about him.There are times when you may be quoting lyrics and a sentence or phrase may be confusing to me. If that is something I suggest you change because the meaning in unclear, just ignore me.

Your first two sentences are so strong, that the third is lacking something; maybe find another, more powerful word for "misses".

The sentence "As soon as you hit that cell hip hop died", you may want to reword. You just got finished saying it [hip hop] was now alive, in the previous sentence. You could even just add the word "again" after "died".

Why would people doubt him if he is the best? Is doubt the word you are looking for there? Jealousy or envy maybe. Rethink that sentence.

I LOVE your next two sentences.

In your second paragraph you don't need the "personally though", just start out with "I don't know you" and use a comma to hook it to the next sentence.

The third sentence about killing other rappers strengths is a little awkward. You may just want to flip it around-"Other rappers hate you because you are killing their strengths"-something like that.

This is an amazing second draft. I don't know what you will be graded on but I think you have done excellent work.

Good luck!