I like the first thesis better, as well. it is much stronger, and not as hard to prove as you might think. Go back to your text; it's your primary source. Look at the places where you first saw the evidence that supports your claim. Make an outline to get your specific points in order. Your thesis for a short essay is not going to be able to include all the characters in the book, so don't worry about that. Stay focused on what you are attempting to show your reader about the text.
You can use kinship as your theme; somber, yet informal as the tone; and as far as style... well, what do YOU think?
It is true, your second thesis is easier to prove, but if you cannot fit it into the required paradigm, you'd better not go there, unless you can talk to your teacher and see if she will let you proceed. Often, if you have a good idea, your teacher will be supportive.
Then again, if you have all summer, why not give both of your ideas a go? See which one you like best. Kite Runner is a wonderful book; there are many possibilities for a great paper. Best of luck.
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