It is important to remember the form that this excellent
and unforgettable poem was written in. Coleridge wrote "The Rime of the Ancient Mariner"
as a literary ballad. The ballad form uses simple language, a good deal of repetition
and strong patterns of rhyme and rhythm. Thus it is no surprise that this poem itself
contains a number of examples of repetition.
To focus on
two however, in lines 20 and 40, we see the same phrase repeated: "The bright-eyed
Mariner." The brightness of the Mariner's eyes is something that is referred to again
and again at various stages throughout the poem, and here this repetition focuses on the
strange appearance of the Mariner whilst also reminding us about the form of the
poem.
Secondly, in the second section of the poem, there is
another good example of how repetition is used for
effect:
Day
after day, day after day,We stuck, nor breath nor
motion;As idle as a painted
shipUpon a painted
ocean.
Note here how the
repetition in these lines reinforces the meaning. The repetition of "day" and "painted"
suggests the helpless, trapped feeling the sailors experience when the ship is becalmed
and they are unable to move it in any direction at all and are effectively
helpless.